http://calondara.livejournal.com/ (
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2003-11-09 09:31 am (UTC)
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Well, I really only found one fault ^^ that would be...:
"..because it didn’t turned out the way I..."
it should be "turn", not "turned" ^^.
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"..because it didn’t turned out the way I..."
it should be "turn", not "turned" ^^.